Imagine that you come home from school one day and find a large wrapped package on the kitchen table. It has your name on the label with no return name or address. You quickly open it and gasp in surprise! Describe what is in the package, who it is from, and what effect this unexpected gift will have on you.
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Have you ever listened to two birds chirping in the trees and wondered what they were saying to each other? Make believe you could actually understand their language for one magical morning. Write down what the two birds said to each other word for word.
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When I got off of school there was no one home. I walked into the kitchen and found a big package on the floor. It had my name on it but didn't say who it was from? I opened it and it was a purple bike! Then I found a letter that said "Dear Misty, I bought you your favorite bike and its your favorite color PURPLE!" Then my mom came back from work, she asked where did you get that? I said "I don't know but Im going outside to ride my new bike."
When I got back from school there was a package I said
"Hey it has my name on it. It's my present then opened it
there was it the clown he said "I am going to kill youI got scared! so I ran to the door and opened it. Then I called the cops. they said " What's your emergency? " "there is a clown trying to kill me " Right away some cop cars swung by very fast vvrrmm ! It was to late I was dead
one day i woke up and found a package on the table it said were going to destroy your world in 2012.
So i open it had pictures inside it of ships signs in grass.
And people took by a space ship so i went to go check it out.
it turns out that it was just kids in costumes I started
laughing the alien kids got mad and chased after me.
THE END
I imagine that when I come home from school I seen a package on the front porch. I didn't open it yet because I wanted to be alone to open it. But I looked all over it and there was no address from who it came from. But it did have MY address on it. How could someone send this to me? I thought, and have no address on it? Well I REALLY wanted to open it and see what it was. But I turned it to the side and and a was stuck to the end of it. I read it aloud, " Dear Talia, This package is for you and this is something not to play with,use it very wisely. Please do remember it can take you among your pleasant dreams." I looked at it then said " I think I should open it and see what it is" I said staring at it. " Here it goes!" I said opening it carefully to make sure that nothing got ruined. But as soon as I saw it I gasped. It was a sparkling diamond moon-stoned necklace. It was so pretty that it shined like a blanket of stars in the sky. I was so amazed at what was right in front of me. But I tried to open up the clasp of the beautiful necklace, but it would not budge. Just then my 7 year old brother came in with a doughnut in his hand. "Hey Talia, what are you doing ?" he said with a mouthful of doughnut. "Umm.. Nothing, I was just about to take a nap!" I said covering the surprise package." Okay!" He said accepting my answer. Then he walked away. "Finally, a little peace!" I said while looking at the note. I unlocked it and put it on, I watched as it started to sparkle. Then it was time for bed time. "I wish I don't have to go to bed!" I said careless and still wearing the necklace. Next thing I know, the sun is up and I was standing there." What just happen here?" I said looking around. "What happen?" my brother said ALL soaked like a sponge. "Umm... Nothing, Isaac!" I said tucking in my necklace inside my sweater but it was already too late, my brother had already seen my necklace. "What's that?" he said pointing to my necklace. " I said nothing Isaac!" I said turning around to the kitchen because my mom was calling me. So I ran inside to see what she wanted but she needed help with the groceries. I was glad mom did not call me just because of the surprise package. I helped her. We ate supper and it was time for bed. My brother was getting ready for bed. "Hey Isaac!" I said with a mouthful of toothpaste. "Can you bring me my hairbrush?" I said calling to him. "Sure, which one?" he said digging through my basket. "I don't know!, just grab one!" I said. "Okay I guess this will do" He said. He ran over to my room and gave it to me. "This isn't even a brush!" I said looking at it "It's a TOOTH BRUSH!!!" I said giving it back to him. " How come it was in my hair basket?" I said looking at him puzzled. "Oh! I might have put it in your basket!" he said. I brushed my hair and went to bed. But when I was in bed I said, "I wish my life wasn't full of surprises!". Then I got to bed wearing my necklace. I woke up the next morning, then I got dressed and fixed my hair. My brother got up looking like a monster. My mom and grandma were up and eating breakfast. I went off to school and just remembered that TODAY WAS MY B-DAY! So when I got to school I was expecting a 'Happy Birthday' but instead I just got a regular-person wave and smile. I was confused. Just then I remembered that I wished that my life wasn't full of surprises. So when I got back from school, I ran to my room and started to pick up the note and read it and it said that I can reverse a wish but I only had one chance so I decided to do it "I wish everything was back to normal!" and the necklace did it's thing. And I had the best b-day ever! But P.S I think I want to keep the necklace for awhile!
Misty - I really like how you started your story! Good capitalization and punctuation. It would be nice to know some more information...Who was the bike from? Did it have special powers? Why would someone send you a surprise bike?
Gavin - Always a scary story huh? ;-) I really like how you used quotation marks (talking marks). Remember that you end sentences with punctuation marks. Also, I like how you added [there was it the clown he said], but [It] should be capitalized since it is his name. (He is super scary!)
Anton - I like how you told me that the kids were in costumes and that they were laughing. Remember that you need to start your sentences with a capital letter and they should end with punctuation. I'm wondering now wondering what happened when the kids were chasing you.
Talia - I love how you always include Issac in your stories. You are very creative. I like how you always include conversation in your stories. I would like to work with you on putting your writing into paragraph form rather than one big paragraph.
Good job guys! I look forward to seeing Dylan, Tialen, Wahachaka, and Teo's stories.
When I came home I found a huge package on the table. I went to the table and tried to open it but couldn't. So I took it outside because it was little in the house. There was a code, it showed me how to open it. It was a package full of money! So I shared it with everybody, and bought my self School supplies.
Two of my sisters came and we walked to the park then we went back to my grandmas house then it was my sister went to on my bed me and two of my sisters went to sleep up stairs my big sister slept on the couch my other sister and me slept on the floor. Me and my dad went to my ants house and we picked my dads friend up then we went to Martin to eat. Then my dad put in gas then we went to Porcupine then we took him to his house then we went to Eaglebutte then we took my Grandpa to rapid city on then on the way we went to by some food then me and my cousin was looking at eagles. then we took my grandpa to the funeral then we went to the basket ball game at the Rush more civic center then there was more then 100 chairs there then we went to the Rush more mall we were playing games then my cousin bought disapearinc then we went to walmart then my dad bought oil then we went back to the funeral.
One day I came home from school, on the kitchen table there was a bag or a package. I didn't now what it was! Then I got closer to it and it was a package. I opened it and it had a billion dollars in it. I said cool and i snuck out of the of the house and went to the store and went shopping for some cloths and groceries and I bought some cloths for the kids and every body else to. I also bought myself some clothes and shoes. I bought some clothes for my cousin and some shoes for him to. I went to go to get something to eat for all of us and went home and went to bed.
When i got back from school i saw a package it was from my dad i opened package then i saw a letter and a picture of my dad in a helicopter he said there was a big mountain he had to carry big boards when he got on top of the mountain he got in a helicopter be fore he got in the helicopter he took pictures with his friends. Then when he got. Then one day he came back then a couple days later it was winter and there was a fire they had to sleep in tents then there was a snow storm and they had to work then when he was done with his work he came back home.
one day when i got home from school, there was a package.i opened it inside was nine thousand ninetey hundred and ninety nine billion dollars, a thing shaped like an aliens head and a blob thing.i said "i wish i knew what to do with this stuff" then the gold thing said in a very deep voice "your wish is granted master" so then i automatically knew what it meant it all has magical powers.so i said "i wish that i had super powers" then it gave me what i wished for so then i said "i wish for a bike"then it gave me a bike.i wished for a lot of things the last thing i said right before my mom walked into the door "i wish for all of this stuff to be hidden!!!".and all the stuff was gone but the wish granter.i showed my mom the money and she said,"get ready where going to minneapolis!!!" so we all got exited and got ready.the end p.s i did make a long one but it must've been more then 4096 words it said so i made this one
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